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My hands are shackled,
my wings were clipped,
I've bowed my head,
my halo chipped.

The one I watched
has thrown me away.
There's no more I can do,
nothing more I can say.
©2005-2009 ~Pensinpotatoes
:iconpensinpotatoes:

Author's Comments

I know it's short, but I don't know if I should add anything to this. Plus, I don't want to ruin it. I actually like this poem lol. And that's really rare. And I believe I owe a thank you to CadoAngelous. The title of one of his poems inspired me to write this. Thankies! Well, I hope you like this!

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:icongiver:
Ah...Short and sweet. ^ ^ That so sweet. Well...in a depressing sort of way. I love the first stanza the most, but that's only because it has the most imagery. I like it.

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"Opera is when a guy gets stabbed in the back and, instead of bleeding, he sings."
~Ed Gardner
:iconeternallydejected:
Short but so full of feeling. Fantastic :)

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"Is your hair on purpose?" - Ab Fab
:iconguitar-babe01:
Its short but I like it alot. Great job! :hug: check out some of my stuff guitar-babe01

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Marlena
:iconpensinpotatoes:
Thanks! Glad you liked it, and yes, I know it's short. I may add more, I don't know. I'll check out your stuff as soon as I can :D

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Tory :D

"Susan we need to discuss the matter
of ya takin' Nurse Henleighs socks
and hidin' them in the hall toilet."

^'Emerson', from the movie I wrote (White Walls, Crazy Halls)
:iconpensinpotatoes:
Thanks :D That means a lot. I'll try to faten it up a bit

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Tory :D

"Susan we need to discuss the matter
of ya takin' Nurse Henleighs socks
and hidin' them in the hall toilet."

^'Emerson', from the movie I wrote (White Walls, Crazy Halls)
:iconpensinpotatoes:
Thank you very much :D Most of my pieces are long. If you want, you can check those out. Most people seem to like Kindled Magic and Devilish. But, it's you choice. Thanks again for the comment! Much appreciated!

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Tory :D

"Susan we need to discuss the matter
of ya takin' Nurse Henleighs socks
and hidin' them in the hall toilet."

^'Emerson', from the movie I wrote (White Walls, Crazy Halls)
:iconeternallydejected:
No, don`t fatten it up. I like it as it is :)

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"Is your hair on purpose?" - Ab Fab
:iconpensinpotatoes:
lol ok. thanks!

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Tory :D

"Susan we need to discuss the matter
of ya takin' Nurse Henleighs socks
and hidin' them in the hall toilet."

^'Emerson', from the movie I wrote (White Walls, Crazy Halls)
:iconcadoangelus:
OMFG I LOVE IT :+favlove:

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"Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers, between supposed brothers"

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